Friday, May 11, 2007

cold air



pulled. tugged. shoved. gasping.
too much, tries to twist, catch breath
can't move, wrist cuffed tight

4 comments:

David Spencer said...

a very nice sub/dom entry drawn. mostly due to the codependence of the haiku and the pic...cover one, and the other loses the connotation added by the other.

one of your better ones drawn.

p.s. - try and ignore the haiku police. we were all (mentally) 15 years old at some time, and hungry for attention. or make all comments non-anonymous,if possible. filling out a form does require an attention span after all...

Anonymous said...

the dude's not even hard wtf

Anonymous said...

Is his being hard important to you? She may have just started, you know.

Some people just can't be happy...

Anonymous said...

some people are fucking morons...