Tuesday, April 24, 2007

chocolate



mouthful of chocolate
fills her cheeks, stretches her throat
smothered in the taste

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

"mouthful of chocolate" = 6 syllables so this is not a haiku

Anonymous said...

"chok-lat." Ease up.

Anonymous said...

The haikus are nice, but there's a picture of a blowjob, and someone is sitting back and counting syllables? WTF?

Are you a jealous unemployed poet or something?

Anonymous said...

wow, hot! source plz?

Anonymous said...

I would like to know the source as well... cute girl.

Anonymous said...

No I'm no poet, but if the blog is about blowjobs AND haiku poetry, then the structure should be 5-7-5. Simple as that.

If it's not 5-7-5 then wtf is the point? Just post the pic of the bitch chugging cock and be done with it if the structure is not 5-7-5. That's all.

Anonymous said...

get a life faggot

Anonymous said...

Faggots usually look at pictures of dicks don't they? I'm mostly concerned with the structure of the Haiku - which has been inconsistent at best!

Anonymous said...

mouthful of chocolate is 5 syllables. fucking idiots.

Anonymous said...

Anyone know where I can find more of this girl?

Anonymous said...

that cock looks delicious